Chapter Title: The Sound of the Shell
Where are the adults!
Character Perspective: Piggy
Dear diary today I got in a plane crash. I landed on a big island with a big mountain in the center. I was on a plane with kids, the only adult was the pilot and he was killed in the crash. After I crashed, I met my new friend Ralph a tall boy with TOW colored hair, I am not sure if he likes me. He is very strong. I feel self conscious around him because I am big, and I told him a nick name of mine so I don’t like to be called by my nick name. He told all the other kids about my nick name. The nick name is Piggy, I really don’t like it because the kids at school call me by my nick name piggy because I am fat. And all the kids started calling me piggy. I had to learn all the names of the survivors. There is a new group of them they are part of a choir and their leader is jack he is a jerk he also wore TOGS and before I could even talk he told me to “shut up fatty” and hates me for no reason and for now I don’t like him. Until he starts to be nicer also when they where going to explore. And I wanted to come but I was replaced by a boy named Simon and jack told me I could not come. Also when they where leaving Ralph told me I was not good at adventuring and told me to stay and get the names of the kids. I was really sad after because I felt like a loser my own friend said I was weak and fat it mad me feel like I sucked. One good thing that happened is we had found a conch shell that had a lot of INTRICACIES that we called a meeting with it made us a COMMUION all the surviving kids and from that we started a government and had a vote between jack the PRECENTOR and Ralph for a leader it ended up all the kids liked Ralph better than jack and voted for Ralph and he won but because Ralph was nice he told jack that him and his choir could be the hunter and jack could be the leader of the hunters and jack was really happy about that and jack and Ralph became pretty much best friends to my dislike so we will see how things go
Thursday, September 17, 2009
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Mr.C, After I sent the chapter 1 blog I notice some problems and info missing. I am hoping that you will accept my newly revised blog. it was important to me for you to see that i noticed that somthing was wrong and put the time in to fix it. thank you travis
ReplyDelete