Lord of the flies blog #8
by: Travis Tibiatowski
I think the most disturbing part of the chapter was when Simon was talking to the Lord of the flies. But the lord of the flies happened to be a pigs decapitated head on a stick with flies eating its guts of the ground. He was in like in a drug like trance he was over heating and sweating while he was talking to the lord of the flies. mainly in this coversation the "pig head" he talk about how simon would die. Also how there was a dark future to come. One thing that was disturbing was how the pig acted as if he was superior and would call Simon a "silly little child", and would to tell him to go "play". I am mainly disturbed by how he had a long conversations with the pig head and that it could tell Simon was going to die. It was weird how he passed out at the end of the conversation.
I think that Jack is mainly responsible for the murder of Simon. He was the one who decided to attack the beastie "Simon". He also suggested to do their brutal chant which obviously brings out agression. I think he also should have waited to see if it was agressive or not. If it was the real beatie it may have been good. But all Jack cares about is killing. his cover up for killing simonn was it was the beastie in duisgise. He abveously knew that it was simon when he puased while telling his hunters.
I think Jacks group of savages killed Simon because when Jack was talking to his hunters he paused then told them it was the beastie in disguies. Also he was closs enough to Simon when he was stabbing him to see it must have been him. My claim is true beacuse if you jump on top of someone and are closs enought to stab them with a knife you should be able to tell who they are. A mental way to tell it was him was that when he was telling his hunters what the beastie was "Simon" he paused and told them it was the beastie in disguies. I think when Simon died it was a part of the book that showed things are getting bad now and there may be dark times ahead. This shows in human nature that we just cant always work togather that in the end there is always going to be a fight a war a "break up of clans".
Tuesday, October 20, 2009
Wednesday, October 7, 2009
Lord of the flies’ blog 6
Beast in the sky
Perspective: Simon
By: Travis Tibiatowski
1. The sign is a beastie that is a dead body of an aviator. That tells them there is war happening.
2. The boys are not aware of it because they think it’s a beastie they have only seen it at night so they couldn’t tell what it was.
3. Sam and Eric where the first to encounter the body which they think is a beast because it was dark and hard to see. 4. Sam and Eric describe the beast has fangs talons and wing and its horrible and aggressive.
5. They have a hyped up not smart attitude and they just want to go primal and kill it.
6. There is really not a beast it’s a pilot I know because in the book it tells you that the “beastie” is a pilot.
7. I think the “beast” that every one is afraid is a ghost it may be effigy of us scared amplified from the dark. And that we don’t have to slay or kill anything like jack says we should with belligerence. He is overly aggressive and only cares about forts and killing malevolently.
Dear diary today we went on a hunt for the “beastie” so far we have not found any thing just a place where jack wants to make a fort no one listens to Ralph anymore. They are starting to like jack more I think it’s because he is errant and more fun. And loose we will see how things go. There may be a lot of martyred ahead.
Beast in the sky
Perspective: Simon
By: Travis Tibiatowski
1. The sign is a beastie that is a dead body of an aviator. That tells them there is war happening.
2. The boys are not aware of it because they think it’s a beastie they have only seen it at night so they couldn’t tell what it was.
3. Sam and Eric where the first to encounter the body which they think is a beast because it was dark and hard to see. 4. Sam and Eric describe the beast has fangs talons and wing and its horrible and aggressive.
5. They have a hyped up not smart attitude and they just want to go primal and kill it.
6. There is really not a beast it’s a pilot I know because in the book it tells you that the “beastie” is a pilot.
7. I think the “beast” that every one is afraid is a ghost it may be effigy of us scared amplified from the dark. And that we don’t have to slay or kill anything like jack says we should with belligerence. He is overly aggressive and only cares about forts and killing malevolently.
Dear diary today we went on a hunt for the “beastie” so far we have not found any thing just a place where jack wants to make a fort no one listens to Ralph anymore. They are starting to like jack more I think it’s because he is errant and more fun. And loose we will see how things go. There may be a lot of martyred ahead.
Sunday, October 4, 2009
Lord of the flies’ blog 5
Perspective Ralph
By: Travis Tibiatowski
1. The assembly was called because the order of priorities have been changing and straying of course of getting rescued.
2. The concerns that where brought up in the assembly where mostly about this beast like sea creature that the little ones have claimed to see come out of the ocean and also been seen in trees some think it’s a ghost.
3. I feel disturbed about these sightings I don’t believe there is a monster but I really don’t know if there is or not.
4. I feel that our government is really taking a beating and that we need to rebuild it some how I think the main contributor is jack. At the meeting he after a little bit of an argument said “who cares about the rules all you do is sit down and tell people what to do you cant hunt or anything”. So that brought me to think I half to do something about jack.
5. I think the little ones cry in their sleep because they have fear about the “beastie” and have night mares.
6. Percival is afraid of the beastie that comes out of the sea because none of us know for sure that there is not “beastie”.
7. I think the dirtiest thing about human nature is that we always have a craving for more and more power and items that we don’t need and that we move to one place and use all the recourses then move to the next place and do the same unlike all mammals who live in co harmony with their environment and help it live and grow there is one other organism that has the same course we do. Which is a virus so we may be viruses?
8. My attitude about being chief is to be fair to every one and get us of is the land.
9. I have not changed much from when we first got stranded besides the fact that I have become a stronger leader.
Perspective Ralph
By: Travis Tibiatowski
1. The assembly was called because the order of priorities have been changing and straying of course of getting rescued.
2. The concerns that where brought up in the assembly where mostly about this beast like sea creature that the little ones have claimed to see come out of the ocean and also been seen in trees some think it’s a ghost.
3. I feel disturbed about these sightings I don’t believe there is a monster but I really don’t know if there is or not.
4. I feel that our government is really taking a beating and that we need to rebuild it some how I think the main contributor is jack. At the meeting he after a little bit of an argument said “who cares about the rules all you do is sit down and tell people what to do you cant hunt or anything”. So that brought me to think I half to do something about jack.
5. I think the little ones cry in their sleep because they have fear about the “beastie” and have night mares.
6. Percival is afraid of the beastie that comes out of the sea because none of us know for sure that there is not “beastie”.
7. I think the dirtiest thing about human nature is that we always have a craving for more and more power and items that we don’t need and that we move to one place and use all the recourses then move to the next place and do the same unlike all mammals who live in co harmony with their environment and help it live and grow there is one other organism that has the same course we do. Which is a virus so we may be viruses?
8. My attitude about being chief is to be fair to every one and get us of is the land.
9. I have not changed much from when we first got stranded besides the fact that I have become a stronger leader.
Monday, September 28, 2009
Chapter 4 Blog
Perspective: Ralph
By: Travis Tibiatowski
1. I feel the little ones never work and just play all day I think that they should work more so we can survive they may not be able to do much but anything helps. I try to PROFFER them jobs but they just run off
2. The little ones play and eat and bathe they waste there time playing instead of working. Like they should be.
3. the hunters paint their faces so they can blend in and sneak up on the pigs. Because if they don’t the pigs can see them and will run away the paint has lots of INTRICACIES
4. I think as leader this foreshadows a dark future between me and jack. Hopefully every thing will be fine
5. When my face is painted I feel power full strong and also like iam a savage. It covers all emotion and weaknesses we can be SPECIOUS in the paint
6. the ship does no see us because there is no smoke from our fire because jack took all of his hunters including the ones who where watching the fire. So he could complete his “ring” to IMMURED the pigs and didn’t tell us.
7. to retake my role as leader I went up against jack about the fire and freaked him out and I said make a new fire so he did when he wanted to put it where I was I stood silently in place so he moved it to an inconvenient spot three yards away so I was assertive and reclaimed my spot as leader.
Dear diary to day was not a good day. The main reason was because when jack went to hunt he took all of his hunters including the ones watching the fire. So when a ship went by to day and I didn’t see smoke I found out he took all the hunters I stood up to him MALEVOLENTLY and told him off. So now I have gained my respect back. So now I have a bad feeling about the up coming future. We will find out
Perspective: Ralph
By: Travis Tibiatowski
1. I feel the little ones never work and just play all day I think that they should work more so we can survive they may not be able to do much but anything helps. I try to PROFFER them jobs but they just run off
2. The little ones play and eat and bathe they waste there time playing instead of working. Like they should be.
3. the hunters paint their faces so they can blend in and sneak up on the pigs. Because if they don’t the pigs can see them and will run away the paint has lots of INTRICACIES
4. I think as leader this foreshadows a dark future between me and jack. Hopefully every thing will be fine
5. When my face is painted I feel power full strong and also like iam a savage. It covers all emotion and weaknesses we can be SPECIOUS in the paint
6. the ship does no see us because there is no smoke from our fire because jack took all of his hunters including the ones who where watching the fire. So he could complete his “ring” to IMMURED the pigs and didn’t tell us.
7. to retake my role as leader I went up against jack about the fire and freaked him out and I said make a new fire so he did when he wanted to put it where I was I stood silently in place so he moved it to an inconvenient spot three yards away so I was assertive and reclaimed my spot as leader.
Dear diary to day was not a good day. The main reason was because when jack went to hunt he took all of his hunters including the ones watching the fire. So when a ship went by to day and I didn’t see smoke I found out he took all the hunters I stood up to him MALEVOLENTLY and told him off. So now I have gained my respect back. So now I have a bad feeling about the up coming future. We will find out
Thursday, September 24, 2009
Lord of the Flies
Chapter 3: Huts on the Beach Blog # 3
Perspective: Jack
By Travis Tibiatowski
Problems with hunting
1. It is important to proffer shelter for the little ones so that they feel protected from the beastie.
2. Jack the precentor and his choir have been told they can be the hunters. Jack has also assigned some of his hunters to take care of the fire. And every one else to make shelter
3. Lots of the jobs aren’t carried out because every one is not working in communiom too lazy to do their jobs and are bathing or eating.
4. I think the most important task for survival is to make shelters and find a food source with nutrition. So you don’t die of malnutrition and so you can sleep comfortable and protect you from the whether.
5. I think Simon is small and shy but he is a good worker and is smart. He would make a good hunter.
6. If we don’t get off this island soon I think things will be hard and people will be changed and formed to be strong. We may also have a enormity finding food and there may be some martyred
7. I don’t get along with Ralph right now because he thinks that I am a compulsive hunter, he thinks I want to even more than I want to get off the Island. He is mad that I am not helping him make shelter. I am mad at him because he thinks my hunting is not important and I know it is because everybody wants meat.
Chapter 3: Huts on the Beach Blog # 3
Perspective: Jack
By Travis Tibiatowski
Problems with hunting
1. It is important to proffer shelter for the little ones so that they feel protected from the beastie.
2. Jack the precentor and his choir have been told they can be the hunters. Jack has also assigned some of his hunters to take care of the fire. And every one else to make shelter
3. Lots of the jobs aren’t carried out because every one is not working in communiom too lazy to do their jobs and are bathing or eating.
4. I think the most important task for survival is to make shelters and find a food source with nutrition. So you don’t die of malnutrition and so you can sleep comfortable and protect you from the whether.
5. I think Simon is small and shy but he is a good worker and is smart. He would make a good hunter.
6. If we don’t get off this island soon I think things will be hard and people will be changed and formed to be strong. We may also have a enormity finding food and there may be some martyred
7. I don’t get along with Ralph right now because he thinks that I am a compulsive hunter, he thinks I want to even more than I want to get off the Island. He is mad that I am not helping him make shelter. I am mad at him because he thinks my hunting is not important and I know it is because everybody wants meat.
Tuesday, September 22, 2009
Lord of the Flies
Chapter 2 “Fire on the Mountain”
Perspective: Simon
1. I think this is a good island. It has food and drink and maybe even some meat from the pigs.
2. The beastie is a snake like creature this young boy saw on the island. He announced that he saw the beastie in the meeting. After the meeting he was in the forest while the other boys were having a bon fire. The fire accidentally spread from the bon fire into the forest and he got burned to death.
3. The beastie represents all the boys fears of being on the island alone and not. having any grown ups they just don’t show it I don’t either.
4. The beastie makes me scared but I can’t let the other boys find out I hope it does not attack me at night.
5. My plan for being rescued is the fire Ralph suggested I think it will work really good and hope fully a plan or a ship will see it.
6. Yes I want to be rescued because its scary being on the island at night and I just want to be at the comfort of my own home eating real food.
7. We started the fire with piggy specks and the fire burned to fast and hot and went out fast with no smoke.
8. The little boy died from the fire that our smoke fire started.
9. I am different from the boys because I am small and quiet also I help piggy unlike any one else. I am also SUFFUSION
10. when I go to bed at night I get really scared and cant really sleep because e of the “beastie” the boy talked about.
Dear diary today we made a fire, to make it we became a COMMUNION it burned to fast and hot it was ENORMITY to bad it went out there was no smoke because we didn’t use FRONDS . Also when we went to light it jack PINCHED Piggy’s glasses and called him a fatty. And said he was too lazy to help but I said he did because of his glasses. Also the little boy with the mark on his faced died from the fire he had talk about a snake beastie thing I am scared. We will see what the night holds. Good night diary.
Chapter 2 “Fire on the Mountain”
Perspective: Simon
1. I think this is a good island. It has food and drink and maybe even some meat from the pigs.
2. The beastie is a snake like creature this young boy saw on the island. He announced that he saw the beastie in the meeting. After the meeting he was in the forest while the other boys were having a bon fire. The fire accidentally spread from the bon fire into the forest and he got burned to death.
3. The beastie represents all the boys fears of being on the island alone and not. having any grown ups they just don’t show it I don’t either.
4. The beastie makes me scared but I can’t let the other boys find out I hope it does not attack me at night.
5. My plan for being rescued is the fire Ralph suggested I think it will work really good and hope fully a plan or a ship will see it.
6. Yes I want to be rescued because its scary being on the island at night and I just want to be at the comfort of my own home eating real food.
7. We started the fire with piggy specks and the fire burned to fast and hot and went out fast with no smoke.
8. The little boy died from the fire that our smoke fire started.
9. I am different from the boys because I am small and quiet also I help piggy unlike any one else. I am also SUFFUSION
10. when I go to bed at night I get really scared and cant really sleep because e of the “beastie” the boy talked about.
Dear diary today we made a fire, to make it we became a COMMUNION it burned to fast and hot it was ENORMITY to bad it went out there was no smoke because we didn’t use FRONDS . Also when we went to light it jack PINCHED Piggy’s glasses and called him a fatty. And said he was too lazy to help but I said he did because of his glasses. Also the little boy with the mark on his faced died from the fire he had talk about a snake beastie thing I am scared. We will see what the night holds. Good night diary.
Thursday, September 17, 2009
lord of the flies chapter 1 blogg revised
Chapter Title: The Sound of the Shell
Where are the adults!
Character Perspective: Piggy
Dear diary today I got in a plane crash. I landed on a big island with a big mountain in the center. I was on a plane with kids, the only adult was the pilot and he was killed in the crash. After I crashed, I met my new friend Ralph a tall boy with TOW colored hair, I am not sure if he likes me. He is very strong. I feel self conscious around him because I am big, and I told him a nick name of mine so I don’t like to be called by my nick name. He told all the other kids about my nick name. The nick name is Piggy, I really don’t like it because the kids at school call me by my nick name piggy because I am fat. And all the kids started calling me piggy. I had to learn all the names of the survivors. There is a new group of them they are part of a choir and their leader is jack he is a jerk he also wore TOGS and before I could even talk he told me to “shut up fatty” and hates me for no reason and for now I don’t like him. Until he starts to be nicer also when they where going to explore. And I wanted to come but I was replaced by a boy named Simon and jack told me I could not come. Also when they where leaving Ralph told me I was not good at adventuring and told me to stay and get the names of the kids. I was really sad after because I felt like a loser my own friend said I was weak and fat it mad me feel like I sucked. One good thing that happened is we had found a conch shell that had a lot of INTRICACIES that we called a meeting with it made us a COMMUION all the surviving kids and from that we started a government and had a vote between jack the PRECENTOR and Ralph for a leader it ended up all the kids liked Ralph better than jack and voted for Ralph and he won but because Ralph was nice he told jack that him and his choir could be the hunter and jack could be the leader of the hunters and jack was really happy about that and jack and Ralph became pretty much best friends to my dislike so we will see how things go
Where are the adults!
Character Perspective: Piggy
Dear diary today I got in a plane crash. I landed on a big island with a big mountain in the center. I was on a plane with kids, the only adult was the pilot and he was killed in the crash. After I crashed, I met my new friend Ralph a tall boy with TOW colored hair, I am not sure if he likes me. He is very strong. I feel self conscious around him because I am big, and I told him a nick name of mine so I don’t like to be called by my nick name. He told all the other kids about my nick name. The nick name is Piggy, I really don’t like it because the kids at school call me by my nick name piggy because I am fat. And all the kids started calling me piggy. I had to learn all the names of the survivors. There is a new group of them they are part of a choir and their leader is jack he is a jerk he also wore TOGS and before I could even talk he told me to “shut up fatty” and hates me for no reason and for now I don’t like him. Until he starts to be nicer also when they where going to explore. And I wanted to come but I was replaced by a boy named Simon and jack told me I could not come. Also when they where leaving Ralph told me I was not good at adventuring and told me to stay and get the names of the kids. I was really sad after because I felt like a loser my own friend said I was weak and fat it mad me feel like I sucked. One good thing that happened is we had found a conch shell that had a lot of INTRICACIES that we called a meeting with it made us a COMMUION all the surviving kids and from that we started a government and had a vote between jack the PRECENTOR and Ralph for a leader it ended up all the kids liked Ralph better than jack and voted for Ralph and he won but because Ralph was nice he told jack that him and his choir could be the hunter and jack could be the leader of the hunters and jack was really happy about that and jack and Ralph became pretty much best friends to my dislike so we will see how things go
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